This month I am going to upload your best compositions of unit 2 about your favourite photo. In this case the essays written by Verónica Espinosa Jiménez and Irene Fernández Funez. Have a look at them, especially to the parts in bold to improve your writings.
My favourite photo (by Verónica Espinosa Jiménez)
"One of my favourite photos is this one by Nick Brandt, who is a very famous English photographer.
He took the photo in Africa in 2010 when he was working in his new project about wild animals.
He was in a country called Kenya. It's like a desert where a lot of elephants used to live and, five years later, the men killed them to sell their ivory.
They reported this problem and prevented the sale from happening. After that, he took this photo when he showed one man for each death of an elephant.
I love this photo because it shows the beauty of Africa and their animals in contrast to the cruelty of human beings."
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| From : http://www.reykjavikboulevard.com/nick-brandt/ |
My favourite photo (by Irene Fernández Funez)
"My favourite photo is one where I'm going out with my boyfriend.
A stranger took the photo in March 2016 when I was on holiday with my boyfriend in Paris.
We were at a place called Disneyland Paris, which is a very famous amusement park. There, you can find many cartoon characters. This image is very special because it was the last one before the park closed.
I love this photo because it's a wonderful place, full of magic, and it reminds me of a lovely holiday. In fact, it was an unforgettable day.
I keep this photo on my phone and on my laptop with other photos taken in Paris."
Thanks for your contribution to the blog and for writing such wonderful essays. Now, the rest ! Post a comment to your classmates' compositions and keep the blog alive !
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