Writing feedback : The most common mistakes in your essays

Dear students,

At last I finished the correction of your February exams ! For you to learn from your mistakes, I think it is a very good idea that you reflect on them. This is why here you can see some sentences that you wrote. Your task ? Identify and correct the mistakes. Are you ready ?

a) In Getafe has a lot of shops and supermarkets.

b) The people in Getafe is friendly.

c) I won the lottery. This is why I feel exciting. 

d) In Getafe there are a lot of shops. Also, exist different means of transport. 

e) I received a bad new yesterday. The news were really bad. 

f) There are many shops and supermarkets as Nassica, El Corte Inglés...

g) There are a lot of means of transport for go to the city centre. 

h) There are a lot of public services near to my house. 

i) A friend said me that he's coming to Madrid. 

j) I have other problem.

k) Another people in Getafe is dangerous.

k) I hate the traffic jams.

l) Althought Madrid is far, you can get there very quickly.

m) I asked to my friend : can you come with me ?

n) Playing football is funny. 

o) Writting is dificult and a diferent activity. 

OK, now that your exams are finished, keep reading, listening to, speaking and writing English. Like that you won't fail in June.